So what have I been up to?
I’ve been writing. I have 45,000+ words and about 10 chapters done on a YA fantasy story. I have the story complete to the end actually but after chapter 10 it goes from rough draft to notations like **add more conflict with the dragon here**. I’m getting there though and I’m really enjoying it. It’s lighthearted and fun and I have two more books that I have in mind after it.
The working title is The Middle Princess, but I’m dithering between that and The Practical Princess, or just Hyacinth, or anything else that comes along that sounds like a better idea. (Opinions welcome) After all, it has to fit in with the other two stories I’m planning to write about her older and younger sister - Forsythia and Chrysanthemum.
Here’s a portion of the first chapter: (critiques welcome - this is a draft)
CHAPTER 1
“Drat!” said Hyacinth. “She’s brought home another one.”
She stood in the castle doorway and frowned at her younger sister. Princess Chrysanthemum’s noble white steed tossed his head and her golden armor flashed in the midday sun, sending motes of light around the courtyard–and into Hyacinth’s eyes.
But it was Chrysanthemum’s prize that caused the most fuss.
Chrysanthemum struck a pose with her sword held high. “I have conquered the Scourge of Edinrood!”
The noise of her approach had brought everyone–the kitchen staff, the King and Queen, the stable boys, even the King’s chief advisor in a half buttoned waistcoat–out to see what was going on. They all clapped and the kitchen boy cheered as he waved his soup ladle in the air.
“Yes,” Hyacinth snapped. She stepped outside and scowled at the conquered Scourge, “That’s all very well. Now what are you going to do with it?”
The large green dragon stomped heavily at the end of a chain attached to Chrysanthemum’s saddle. A muffled roar and clouds of smoke emerged from the dragon’s tightly muzzled jaws. He shifted back and forth, claws ticking on the cobbles.
Hyacinth put her hands on her hips. “You already have three dragons eating their heads off in the stables. Do you have any idea how hard it is to find flame resistant straw? I have to send clear off to RumpelStiltska for it!”
Chrysanthemum dismounted with a flourish and waved airily at the dragon. “Don’t worry so much, sister dear. He’ll be no trouble at all.” She strode past her sister into the castle, her armor clinking with every step. A babble of admiring voices followed her, they pushed past Hyacinth and begged to hear the latest adventure.
“No trouble for you.” Hyacinth muttered. A muffled “HHHRRMMPPHH!” and rattling chains brought her attention back to the dragon. The beast balanced on haunches and tail, and clawed with his front feet at his leather muzzle. The noble steed’s eyes rolled, flashing white around the edges, and he backed away, pulling the chain taut.
Hyacinth looked around–nobody to be seen. “There’s never a stable hand around when you need one.” She sighed and stepped up to the white charger’s head. “Oh, come on then.” She led the horse towards the stables; the dragon dropped to all fours as the chain on his head drew taut, and he trudged along behind.
She stopped in front of the stable, unfastened the dragon’s chain from the saddle, and wrapped it loosely around one of the hitching posts. “You, SIT. Stay.”
The dragon gave a startled snort and to his own surprise sat down with a “WHUMP”.
“That’s a good dragon.”